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Untitled 9 by ~star382000:iconstar382000:



*This is a thank you for the lonely
This is a shout out to the broken hearted
This is a poem for those out there
Who have and haven't started
This is praise for the people
This is a scripture for the friends
This is a will for the willing
And a blessing till the end
You were there when it began
And have been there through it all
My rise to fame
Then my dastardly fall
In my mind you were backseat
But in reality you were driving
Supporting me all the while
With hell I kept colliding
This is a begging to all out there
To never give up again
And to persevere throughout it all
And always remember when*
©2005-2009 ~star382000
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Author's Comments

This is one of many poems I wrote the night I wrote Untitled 8, the rest I am going to put up too. All thoughts are welcome and wanted, thanks :)

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:iconactionmang:
This is really good, I like it alot, alot!

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:matrixfight:
"Listen -- strange women lying in ponds distributing
swords is no basis for a system of government. Supreme executive power derives from a mandate from the masses, not from some farcical aquatic ceremony."
:iconstar382000:
oh thank you! and thanks for the fav :D

ooh, and I sent out your Christmas card today! you should get it sometime next week :D

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*If everything was just fuzzy and warm,
If everything in my head reflected my heart,
Maybe, just maybe, I wouldn’t feel so, so far apart.*
:iconactionmang:
awww jeeez you do all this stuff for me...I feel like a lousy friend. I'm sorry Kate. But thank you!

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:matrixfight:
"Listen -- strange women lying in ponds distributing
swords is no basis for a system of government. Supreme executive power derives from a mandate from the masses, not from some farcical aquatic ceremony."
:iconstar382000:
no, you're not a lousy friend at all! I know we don't talk much and didn't really get to know each other over summer, I just thought I'd send a card to brighten the season more lol :P no reason to be sorry :)

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*If everything was just fuzzy and warm,
If everything in my head reflected my heart,
Maybe, just maybe, I wouldn’t feel so, so far apart.*
:iconactionmang:
...Okay, if you say so... Thanks Again Kate you Rock! :D

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:matrixfight:
"Listen -- strange women lying in ponds distributing
swords is no basis for a system of government. Supreme executive power derives from a mandate from the masses, not from some farcical aquatic ceremony."

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